Mrs Cawood taught us how to parachute into one event for our writing. This helps us to describe one event instead of talking about lots of things in one story.
She started with writing a story about her quarter marathon in Rotorua but we nearly fell asleep so we helped Mrs Cawood to make an interesting beginning. We changed the beginning too...
Huff, puff, huff, puff will this ever end!
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